Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Plip Plop

Plip Plop
by me(whatever) 

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3 comments:

  1. That took a long time....

    original format:

    Plip Plop*
    by me(whatever)

    white comforter,
    soft morning
    dark clouds
    pitter patter*
     
    into the august air
    onto the rough grass
    over the plum tree leaves
    tip tap*
     
    from the window sill
    where I can see the rain
    like words on a page.
    drip drop*

    *italic

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  2. So are you trying to create an image?

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    1. Yup. It's probably hard to see, but it's a window with rain falling outside.
      *Lends to the last verse of the poem

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